英語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)改錯(cuò)（八篇）
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WhenIwasinhighschool,mostofmyfriendhadbicycles.IhopedIcouldalsohaveit.OnedayIsawasecond-handbicyclethatwasonlyonehundredyuan.Iaskedmyfatherthemoney.Buthesaidhecouldonlygivemehalfofthemoney.Heshouldfindtheotherhalfmyself.SoIwenttosellnewspapersaftertheschool.MyfatherwaspleasedifIshowedhimthemoneyamonthafter.Hegivesmetheotherwhenfifty.YoucanimaginehowmuchhappyIwaswhenIrodetoschoolonmyownbicycle.
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Todayisthehappydayinthisholiday.AlthoughIwasverytired,butIfoundmyselfinthesebusydays.Iamafraidoftakenabususually,theawfulsmellofthebusdriveImad,makemefeelcarsick.ButtodayIdidfeelcarsick.Icandefeatcarsicknessfinally.AtnightIwentoutwithanoldfriendwhoIeverlikehim,butallofuswerebusyintheexaminationatthehighschoolthatwehadn'tbeentogether.IwassuchsurprisedasIreceivedhiscalling.Atfirst,Ithoughtwewouldnevermeetbeforewegraduated.Thankhimgavemeahappyday!
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Dancingismyhobbyandotherwise,whenIheardtherewouldbeaget-togethertocelebratethe60thNationalDayintheeveningofOctober1st,Isignedupfortheperformance.Luckily,Ibecomeamemberofthedancegroup.Duringthesummervacation,Ipracticedhardwithothersregardlessofthecoldweather.Afterthenewschooltermbegan,whenIcarriedonwiththepracticewhileIwasworkinghardatmystudies.Andfinally,thegreatdaycame.Intheevening,thousandspeoplegatheredinthesplendidTiananmenSquare.Bythebrightlightsshiningaround,weweredancingtothepleasantmusichappilyandjoyful.Beautifulfireworksintheclearnightskyaddedtomyexcited.Itwasrealtyanunforgettableexperience.
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MostfamiliesinChinahopedtheirsinglechildrenwillhaveahappyfuture,sotheyareverystrictintheirchildren.Sodoteachersinschool!Manychildrenaregivensomuchhomeworkthattheyhavehardlyanysparetimehavesports.Thechildrenareforbiddentodoanythingbuttostudy.Nowondersuchmanychildrenaretiredoflessons.Someevenattackorkillhisparentsandteachers!Ibelievemanypeoplealreadyreadthiskindofnewsinnewspapersormagazines.Shouldn’twedrawlessonfromtheaccidents?Nowourgovernmentismakingoutaplantosolvetheeducationproblems.
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WhenJackbowedtosomeone,healwaysdidit
muchtooquickly.Youneedn’twaitanylongerafterhefinishednodhishead.Sohewasblamedfornomanner.Butsomewarmheartedmentaughthim,"Whenyoubowtosomebodynexttime,youcancount'January,February,March,untilDecember.Thenyoucouldliftyourbodyup.Thus,theceremonywillbeveryperfect.”Thenextday,hemethisuncle.Hedidasthementold.Thebowwastoolongthatitmadehisuncleescapeawaysoonwithasurprisinglook.WhenJacklookeddown,hefoundhisunclegone.Soheaskedthepasser,"Inwhatmonthdidhegoaway?"
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Ourgovernmentistryinghardtobuildanenergy-savingsociety.Itissomebody’sdutytoworkhardandreachthisgoal.However,noteverybodyhasrealizedtheimportantofit.Takeourschoolforexample.Sometimewecanseethatlightsandcomputersarestillonafterclass.Somestudents
evenforgettoturnonthetapafterusingitandhavewaterrunningallthetime.Ourpapersareprintedononlyoneside,causingmuchwaste.It’stimewedidsomethingtoavoidthiskindofwaste.Firstly,makesurethatallthelightandotherelectricfacilitiesturnedoffwhenweleavetherooms.Trytoformingthehabitofturningoffthetapimmediatelyafterusingit.What’smore,papersshouldnotbeprintedonbothsidesandreusedifpossible.Inaword,ifeverybodyhastheawareofreducingthewasteandtakesaction,wecancontributetooursociety
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Themainpurposeofnewspapersaretoprovidenews.Ifyouexaminenewspapersclosely,youwouldfindthereareallsortofnews:accidents,floods,fires,wars,sports,books,etc.Thenewscovereverythinghappenstopeopleandtheirsurroundings.Sometimesthereissomenewswhichisveryinterested.Anewsreportisusualshort,exceptwhenitisveryimportant,buthasaplentyofinformation.Itisalsowritinginshortparagraphs.Thefirstparagraphisinthefactasummaryofthenews.Itgivesallthenecessaryinformation,what,when,where,how,andwhy.
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First,I’dliketothankyouforyourreminding,althoughIdon’tagreewithyourviewwhichstudentsshouldspendmoretimeontheirlessonsinsteadofreadnovels．Indeed,readingnovelstakesupsomeofthetimethatshouldspentonlessons,butit’llmakeusknowwhathardlifeis．Besides,byreadingnovelswecangainwhatwecan’tlearnfromourtextbook．Ofcourse,readingnovelshasit’sshortcomings．Novelsthathavewrongideaswillmakeustodosomethingwrong．Maybe,inyoureyes,thedisadvantagesofreadingnovelsoutweighstheadvantages．Andinmyopinion,readingnovelsisjustasanotherpairofeyes,whichbroadensmyhorizon
答案
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1.friend改為friends【解析】考查名詞數(shù)的變化。Mostof決定了名詞必須用復(fù)數(shù)形式。
2.it改為one【解析】考查代詞用法。it代替同一個(gè)，one指同類里邊的一個(gè)，此處我希望我也能有一輛，與前面提到的是一類。
3.that改為which【解析】考查非限制性定語(yǔ)從句關(guān)系詞。非限制性定語(yǔ)從句的先行詞指物時(shí)只能用which不能用that.
4.themoney前加for【解析】考查介詞用法。此處askmyfather的目的應(yīng)該是錢(qián)。askmyfather與themoney之間需要加表目的的介詞。
5.He改為I【解析】考查代詞用法。由前句hesaidhecouldonlygivemehalfofthemoney.和后句的myself.可知此處應(yīng)該改為I.
6.If改為when【解析】考查連詞用法。按照句意應(yīng)該是一個(gè)月后，當(dāng)我給他看錢(qián)的時(shí)候，可知此處應(yīng)該用when。
7.After改為later【解析】考查副詞用法。此處用副詞，不能用連詞。
8.gives改為gave【解析】考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。按照上下文敘述的都是發(fā)生地事情。
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