小作文是考研英語寫作中比較容易拿分，甚至拿高分的部分�？墒怯捎谛∽魑男枰⒁獾牡胤奖容^多，加上考場上緊張、焦急，很多小伙伴會在這個地方出現(xiàn)不該有的失誤。以下是小編為大家整理的2017考研英語寫作技巧，僅供大家參考。
范文：
Dear Li Ming
I am writing this mail is to congratulate on yours admitted to a university and put forward suggestion regarding the preparation for university life. The detailed information is listed as the following.
At the top of the list , the university is one of the most important parts of our life ,you may have a wonderful life in it. Another point I would like to draw your attention is that inthe campus , you may have much free time , you should take good advantage of it. In addition , there are many excellent people in the university ,you should be modest in it .
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. And I am greatly grateful for your time and attention.
Truely yours
Zhang Wei
點評：
本篇作文的作者在每段開頭首行縮進4個字符，這點做的很不錯，但還是存在一些問題：
⑴格式錯誤
�、貲ear Li Ming這個稱呼后面應(yīng)該加逗號;
②yours后面也要加逗號。
�、普Z法錯誤
�、俚谝欢蔚谝痪湓捴杏袃蓚�謂語動詞am writing和is;on是介詞，后面應(yīng)該接動名詞，所以應(yīng)該是admitting,但此處是“被錄取”，應(yīng)該用被動。這句話應(yīng)該改為：I am writing this mail to congratulate you on your being admitted into a university;
②從第二段看，提出的建議不止一個，而suggestion可數(shù)，所以應(yīng)該用suggestions;
�、墼敿殐�(nèi)容如下，The detailed information is listed as follows和The detailed information is listed as the following都可以，只不過the following一般做前置定語，前面一個句子是常用的表達，后面一個句子用的較少;
�、�“在我們的生活中大學是最重要的部分之一”應(yīng)該是in our life. Another point I would like to draw your attention is……I would like to draw your attention做后置定語，但這里要注意：雖然draw attention to是固定搭配，但這個to加不加都行。第二段的內(nèi)容還行，但是論述不夠充分，應(yīng)適當拓展;
⑤最后要注意的是Truly yours的書寫，尤其是“Truly”的書寫;
⑶優(yōu)化建議
�、俦硎�“第一、第二、第三”的連詞：
To begin with, furthernore,/what is more, Last but not least
In the first place In the second place At last
�、谠诘诙卫锩妫ㄗh提出一個觀點之后用一句話闡述。如果字數(shù)太多，可以只用2個觀點;如果字數(shù)偏少，則可以提出三個觀點，再略作闡述。
�、郾硎�“重要”的詞：crucial, fundamental, essential